Rough Cut - The Feedback

Feedback Sheets

Last Thursday the class watched everyone's rough cuts and we wrote down notes for improvement on each other's videos. When we got handed our feedback back we analysed the criticisms and worked together to identify what the most common points for improvement were.

• A lot of people said that there was  a lack of colour is our shots and that some of the shots were too dark to see. 
• Some said that some of our acting was unconvincing like the argument scene and the banging on the door.
• Others said that our middle part was a bit boring, had too much walking around in it. Something else needs to happen, to create an edge to the video.
• Also the video is broken up into three sections but they aren't divided up very evenly. Some said we need to lengthen the start and end a bit more.
• Another comment we received was to involve the female character more and make it more clear as to who she actually is.
• Lastly, we need to use a more variety of shots, more close ups in particular.